Peer Review 2 for my Documentary Poster

As reference in any earlier post I received feedback from the head of campus and the media board who had offered me their high recommendations to make some slight improvements to the poster I had already created for my documentary. Of course as I desired a high quality product I took these under my wing whilst also incorporating some of the suggestions my peers and lecturer had recommended to me in addition

Here is the original poster before the adjustments were took into place, the main areas that were identified by both peers and professional colleagues was the reduction in the size of the logo and re-alignment of the title for the documentary.

Displayed above is the finished creation once the errors had been correctly identified, removed and improved. I took all of the ideas I was offered into valuable consideration and ensured the main areas I focused on was the logo and title of the programme. Once all of the required concerns had been corrected, I re-addressed Taylor my classmate to see how she regarded the improved product and if she could suggest any more minor concerns she believed  I could improve on. She praised the use of a right alignment to position the text commenting it allowed the words to flow in sync and harmony with one another. She was also highly impressed with how the institutional logo appeared now it had been reduced, she reflected how her eye-line was directed directly to the title of the documentary rather then alternating attention between the logo and headline when they had been both of an identical size and competition for dominance. The only point she could suggest was to move the position of the logo slightly upwards but besides from this insignificant detail she was content with what I had produced. I feel as if I have benefited massively from this procedure as not only has it aided me in targeting potential errors that could mark my product down but also allowed my peers to suggest appropriate improvements that have helped me develop my technical and production skills as a whole.